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Post by Raymond Neely on Jan 27, 2011 11:38:13 GMT -5
by Raymond Neely
I wonder if it hurts when you're drinking down the spurts of the unrevving twitching half human. Drink down the mercury then smirk for me as it's dripping off your chin. Open up a hose so the oil don't spoil, vampire of machines.
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cynthiacox
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Post by cynthiacox on Jan 27, 2011 18:17:11 GMT -5
Nice writing~not my particular genre. I grew up with too much Star Trek to be able to get into the vampires. Great use of words and imagination! You know there is a huge market for this writing. Nice work even though it's not for me per se', there are millions out there that would disagree and love it:)
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