Post by cynthiacox on May 13, 2011 10:49:32 GMT -5
This teenager who writes poetry makes me very proud. Truthful expression of releasing life in what poetry offers.
JJ King wrote this and has been to a Windhorse Healing Arts poetry reading and wants to get more involved.
I am sending the link here and hoping he will become a member:) I'll try.
Critique, feedback and reviews would be appreciated. We are helping a teenager to grow in a constructive form of expression that words can provide to a growing soul. May we never forget to grow and help others in their journey with actions to help:) Thanks!
I SEE RED
Death will come swift for you, as I bring.
Hell to your world! I watch you. I stalk you and learn your every thought!
I see you with my girl and I SEE RED!
My blood begins to boil like grease on the stove.
I catch myself before I lunge for the kill for I know it is too soon.
I walk away to calm my nerves and to see more cooler than red!
But I find myself back tracking to find you then again.
I see my girl leave your arms and red is all I see.
My blood boils but again I catch myself,
But as I find myself calm,
I hear the voice of my girl tell you,
"We must stop! I am with him,not you! Forget about me as I have already forgot about you!"
I seen the sight that burst my heart like a balloon.
You strike her with a mighty fist sending my girl to the ground.
My angel lays there with red on her face crying my name,
my blood began to boil.
My hands began to strike and I SEE RED!
I leap to my feet and dash to her side as fast as a cheetah.
I see her cry and her lips move but I hear nothing but ringing.
I look at you and again my rage fumes like never before as my anger is released on your flesh!
I see colors.
I hear sounds and you.
Nothing. You seen nothing.
You smiled nothing for your heart has stopped.
I rise to my feet. My angel by my side. I look around. I look at you.
ALL I SEE IS RED!
JJ King wrote this and has been to a Windhorse Healing Arts poetry reading and wants to get more involved.
I am sending the link here and hoping he will become a member:) I'll try.
Critique, feedback and reviews would be appreciated. We are helping a teenager to grow in a constructive form of expression that words can provide to a growing soul. May we never forget to grow and help others in their journey with actions to help:) Thanks!
I SEE RED
Death will come swift for you, as I bring.
Hell to your world! I watch you. I stalk you and learn your every thought!
I see you with my girl and I SEE RED!
My blood begins to boil like grease on the stove.
I catch myself before I lunge for the kill for I know it is too soon.
I walk away to calm my nerves and to see more cooler than red!
But I find myself back tracking to find you then again.
I see my girl leave your arms and red is all I see.
My blood boils but again I catch myself,
But as I find myself calm,
I hear the voice of my girl tell you,
"We must stop! I am with him,not you! Forget about me as I have already forgot about you!"
I seen the sight that burst my heart like a balloon.
You strike her with a mighty fist sending my girl to the ground.
My angel lays there with red on her face crying my name,
my blood began to boil.
My hands began to strike and I SEE RED!
I leap to my feet and dash to her side as fast as a cheetah.
I see her cry and her lips move but I hear nothing but ringing.
I look at you and again my rage fumes like never before as my anger is released on your flesh!
I see colors.
I hear sounds and you.
Nothing. You seen nothing.
You smiled nothing for your heart has stopped.
I rise to my feet. My angel by my side. I look around. I look at you.
ALL I SEE IS RED!
