Post by cynthiacox on May 13, 2011 10:47:45 GMT -5
This teenager who write poetry makes me very proud. Truthful expression of releasing life in what poetry offers.
JJ King has been to a reading at Windhorse and wants to get more involved in writing in southern WV.
Please critique, offer feedback and reviews on his work This would be appreciated. We are helping a teenager to grow in a constructive form of expression that words can provide to a growing soul. May we never forget to grow and help others in their journey with actions to help:) Thanks!
To You I Am Nothing, TO HER, I am Everything!
You treat me like I'm nothing,
Yet, I'm still your friend.
WHY?
Why must I put myself through this hell when she treats me like gold.
You say your my best friend, my "Sissy", but you put me off all the time.
But,she puts me first,like a King.
I'm so close to say forget you and leave you behind, like you did me.
But, I can't.
I just can't.
My heart won't allow me to.
She tells me that I am someone special.
But, you tell me, I'm nothing!
You bring out the dark side of me,
But, She brings me to a happy place somewhere I'm not used to being.
You may have been everything to me at one time but now your NOTHING to me!
But, to her, I am her everything and she is mine.
She is my angel from heaven above and your the demon that makes my blood boil!
Hell got hotter and heaven gets farther from me,
But, what keeps me going is HER,
YOU! You take me down.
All I must say is "THE HELL WITH YOU!"
I give upon trying with you when I have her to help me so my heart may heal from your hurt!
She's all I need in my life so goodbye you and HELLO HER!
Then who may say I am nothing, don't know me, for to her I am everything!
JJ King has been to a reading at Windhorse and wants to get more involved in writing in southern WV.
Please critique, offer feedback and reviews on his work This would be appreciated. We are helping a teenager to grow in a constructive form of expression that words can provide to a growing soul. May we never forget to grow and help others in their journey with actions to help:) Thanks!
To You I Am Nothing, TO HER, I am Everything!
You treat me like I'm nothing,
Yet, I'm still your friend.
WHY?
Why must I put myself through this hell when she treats me like gold.
You say your my best friend, my "Sissy", but you put me off all the time.
But,she puts me first,like a King.
I'm so close to say forget you and leave you behind, like you did me.
But, I can't.
I just can't.
My heart won't allow me to.
She tells me that I am someone special.
But, you tell me, I'm nothing!
You bring out the dark side of me,
But, She brings me to a happy place somewhere I'm not used to being.
You may have been everything to me at one time but now your NOTHING to me!
But, to her, I am her everything and she is mine.
She is my angel from heaven above and your the demon that makes my blood boil!
Hell got hotter and heaven gets farther from me,
But, what keeps me going is HER,
YOU! You take me down.
All I must say is "THE HELL WITH YOU!"
I give upon trying with you when I have her to help me so my heart may heal from your hurt!
She's all I need in my life so goodbye you and HELLO HER!
Then who may say I am nothing, don't know me, for to her I am everything!