Vampire of Machines

[Raymond Neely]

by Raymond Neely

I wonder if it hurts
when you're drinking down the spurts
of the unrevving twitching half human.
Drink down the mercury
then smirk for me
as it's dripping off your chin.
Open up a hose
so the oil don't spoil,
vampire of machines.

[cynthiacox]

Nice writing~not my particular genre. I grew up with too much Star Trek to be able to get into the vampires. Great use of words and imagination! You know there is a huge market for this writing. Nice work even though it's not for me per se', there are millions out there that would disagree and love it:)