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Post by stephengodfrey on Jan 26, 2011 8:24:15 GMT -5
The grand soft spring rain sprawled across the front poarch tin roof. Old oak rocking chairs creaking on tongue-n-groove wood slats; that hummed in unison.
I sat in a small chair next to my Paw Paw and Uncle, watching with amazement at the fervor with which they rocked.
I remember their clothes; denim jackets, pants and steel toed boots.
The pouch would come out of a coat pocket. "Red Man," the favorite chaw of choice.
The rocking would continue for hours without a single phrase being uttered by either man. They spoke a language only they knew. Kin-folk, father and son- "Red Man."
The rain paraded it's splendor and there was no need for a spittoon. In a young boy's eyes, It seemed they could spit a hundred feet.
Red and white pouch with the strong tobacco smell stinging your nose, watching, wondering what they were thinking.
Again my silence is broken by the fast paced rocking, and I return from my day dream.
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Post by Raymond Neely on Jan 27, 2011 11:24:44 GMT -5
Yep. Just fine. Imagery and all. Clearly, coherently told. Makes me taste and smell the redman chewin' baccer. I know about the kind of old men that you mean.
Raymond
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Post by stephengodfrey on Jan 27, 2011 21:05:04 GMT -5
Thanks Debra, yes, the things we remember. Steve
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Post by stephengodfrey on Jan 27, 2011 21:05:36 GMT -5
Thanks Raymond, I appreciate you buddy. Steve
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